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Sunshine and Dynamite / / revamped story

 
Lee Sun Wei (李荪微)/Sunny

Dylan/Not-James

I breathe, and it feels like his eyes are all-knowing as they stare into mine so intensely and fully. "Thank you," I can't help but choke out. "For... seeing me."

A breeze blows over us, and a strand of hair falls out from behind my ear. There's an eternity long moment where we just look at each other, my vision slightly blocked by the line of black across it. But it doesn't stop me from looking at him, seeing him.

He leans over, gently, and pushes it back behind my ear. When he does, he whispers. "Thank you for letting me."

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Sunny and Dylan are from two worlds. Sunny just wants to go back to the past. Dylan just wants to live in the now.

But one thing ties them together--both of them are afraid of the future.

This is a love story, not in the sense that girl meets boy and boy meets girl and they both fall in love. No, it is a love story, and girl does meet and boy and boy does meet girl, but they learn something greater than that.

They don't specifically need each other in the wholesome sense that Sunny needed Dylan and Dylan needed Sunny. No, they just so happened to need something that someone could provide, and sometimes, the world is fateful and kind enough to let two people meet at the right place, at the right time.

https://www.wattpad.com/myworks/100508100-sunshine-and-dynamite-

Hi, friends. I have recently decided to revamp my story Sunshine and Dynamite. This was originally a short, 5-chapter storybook with a sort of vague-ish ending. However, the story pretty much left you hanging and gave you just an insight into Sun's life. Now, I have decided to add 5 or so more chapters, introducing Dylan to you (these are a work in progress and is thus not posted yet). I have a prelude, which introduces you to Sun, and an interlude, which introduces Dylan, and I will ad a postlude, where it's like an artsy little epilogue.

Please go read it, it would mean the world to me.

 Thank you,
Claudia

   
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  1. Nukey Noor11 July 2017 at 00:02

    INDEED IT LEFT ME HANGING. LIKE WHAT OUGBAIDGBAODUGBDKJBGDOUGBDGBK.

    Wait so the next 5 chapters you're putting up are just insights to Dylan's life, right? They're not gonna intersect anymore?

    P.S. Did you make those Tumblr-ish frame-things? They're pretty cool. Canva (though I don't think I've seen Canva having this sort of layout)?

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  2. Claudia Khaw11 July 2017 at 04:46

    Ahahaha, I know :P

    Anyways, yes, their lives will intersect but you it will then be in Dylan's point of view, because in the first five chapters, the sole focus was really on Sun, and Sun's feelings, and pretty much none of Dylan's internal monologue. Therefore, I will be writing more about Dylan.

    P.S. Yeah, I made them to portray what I think of Sun and Dy in my mind :) Thanks for thinking that they're cool, I worked for a bit on them hahaha. Not Canva. I... actually... used, like, Microsoft Word. Lol.

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    1. Nukey Noor11 July 2017 at 19:25

      Dylan's point of view as in the whole story A.K.A everything that happened with Sunny and Dylan or is there gonna be more to the story (after he left Sunny's house for his ex-girlfriend)?

      Yep. I can tell that they're not Canva-made.

      By the way, how do you insert a chapter before all of your existing chapters? Because I tried doing that once, and it didn't work.

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